Newest pages + Chapter 1 rewrite

Newest pages (Chapter 12)

In this slideshow to the left you can see the most recent chapter I've written and illustrated. It's already more than a few months old because I haven't had that much time to continue the story because of priorities that got in the way and also the fact that Im rewriting chapter 1 too.
In this chapter (chapter 12) called "Psycho Technique!" we see one of the lead characters (Yana Mitajiri, the woman with the ponytail) go up against one of the main villains of the story (Callagun Kunoyoshi, australian guy with a mullet).
This chapter is an introduction for Callagun and also and introduction of the psycho techniques that the characters use to fight against eachother. We also see the morals and of each character and understand why they do the things that they do.
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I had decided to redraw the first chapter for the second time because I felt the older versions didn't quite fit to the current story and personality of the main character. I also played around a bit more with the perspectives in these pages, the hardest bit for me was the fisheye perspective in the second page in the first panel.
In this chapter we get introduced to the main character: Kyo, his best friend: Okimoto, Kyo's potential love interest Akari Yoshikawa and Kyo's bullies Anato (the others are currently unnamed).
The first page is very important foreshadowing for later in the story :).

And since Im rewriting the first chapter, Im probaly going to rewrite almost the whole of Issue 1 which is about 8-9 chapters that Im going to change up a bit.